Sounds quite interesting... I like almosted everything, but melody a little annoying for me. Anyway this is NICE JOB which made with good quality and I never seen something like this stuff at this forum...
I hope I'll see you next time with new tune here!
[G-Ruff]: agree with inZ. drums could use a small boost on about ~250 hz. and try to lower the pitch of them. use wave shaper or just compress them harder, dno... ;P